Thursday, September 13, 2007

Character One | WS

Rachel; (OLD VERSION)

5'7". Light blue eyes with large bouncing curls of brown hair. Large curls, not the small stringy stuff. Starts by wearing all white wolf fur. Pure white with black linings on the hood, cuffs, and trim of the coat. Higher dark hiking boots.

What's special about this character?

Her past?

Family?

What is her personality like? Flaws?

In this story; what does she add to it?

Conflicts? Interests?

Describe her in three words;

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Rachel; (NEW VERSION)

5'6". Blue eyes, darker near her retina and lighten outs quickly as it rushes to the boarder of it. Large bouncing curls of dark brown hair that cascades down to just a bit below her shoulder blades. Large curls, not the smaller. Tends to be dressed in white, closely fitting clothing that accents her fit body. Carries a belt with various pouches.

She's a high tier torture based about ten years from the present. Unsure of her connection with anyone for the time being, but in any case she would be a part of an extremely secretive and faraway base. The station, however, would actually be near a small town community that has little idea of what goes on over head. Rachel often looks down to the town in hopes of going some day for a reason she really has no idea about. She deals with some of the most important people in the world at the time. In this future there are nearly an uncountable amount of global 'players' that govern much of how the world is run. Using torture, a form of questioning and methodology that had practically gone extinct for so very many years has come around is used here at several different levels depending on the importance of the case.

A display of rank for the tortures here is their outfit, and with Rachel's being so white it is a display of her perfection in the art. Using mostly chemical means for torture, along with very precise tools meant to extract pain to a near unbelievable amount and also be capable of bringing a person from the steps of the underworld. The lower rank a torture is the darker their suits will be as to make the blood thats shed seem less apparent.

She holds a very scary perspective on life and death. She, of all people, know how close you can get and how little it takes to push a person too far; life is an extremely fragile thing. In that sense though, she plays with it often, always looking for new ways to get a person just a hair closer to meeting their fate and then taking them back. Obviously, she is so desensitized to death. Could easily end the lives of millions if that was reported to be her "duty" and never look back on it. With this feeling comes one of her major personality traits and that is her childish enjoyment with torture. Loves seeing their reaction. It's a passion to her, it's how she gets a kick out of life.

One of her biggest flaws is how accepting she is of so much. Like a child. Why is the sky blue? Well, someone told her it was that way, and she blindly accepted it. Every day she takes pills, at this point in life the idea of eating and indulging in such things has become an activity for the superior, it's far cheaper and more affective to digest pills that act as little generators in their stomach by using the energy in the acid to continually make nutrients for the body. Along with these pills she takes a memory suppressor unknowingly every day that is specially created to remove ideas of her past. The reason for this is part of her training, many potential tortures are released because the pill does not adequately hide all the underlying subconscious memories that may conflict with what they have to do to the people.

Describing her in three words
Playful, Deadly, Lost

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